yeah im not feelin this one either....
i think you had a good idea with what you wanted to do, but it didnt turn out well...
the brushing or w/e it is on the left side really doesnt go well, there is too much and at too high of an opacity, fix that...
the font is choppy (not by too much) and you should make your tag jus a lil bit smaller and in the corner more...
all in all its not bad, was it your first sig that you made, cause if it was good job...
6/10

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