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Old 11-26-04, 02:09 PM   #11
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r-rated got this one, he had much more detail and it was easy to understand. street u had a lot of god ideas, but your rhyming was kinda basic, u need to up your vocab. overall i think. just need to use more advanced vocab and ideas i think.
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