yeah umm...
this time buck is hanging of WAAAY too much, you have to fix that no doubt...
like you said the backround is too dark, fix that as well...
on the right side, buck gets cut off a lil bit, jus move him over to the left a lil and it will fix it...
although, again i do think the font goes well with the backround, good choice...
id stay away from using the bar because its been getting played for awhile now, if your gonna use it maybe throw your own lil technique on to it?
still not bad but its a 6/10 because of those things...

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