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Old 11-26-04, 02:30 PM   #36
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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In Deph ~ Come ruthless in this,... Nice flow, vocab wordplay
dope man...

into the link of deletion..we all bad..even
when the evil is tedius..we think that way
becuase of the media..its all in comparisin
compared to herorin..weed is easy..when you
narrow it..
^Linked the intro but the above bars were sicck...

2X4 ~ Come nice I like the way you merked some of the
people on rapverse who act like the RV monies real...
started a bit slow but come nice from middle to end...
Vocab could have been better in places but the places
it was in and the verse more effective,.. Flowed nice with
some dope word play...

Rapverse, to many homies lookin for them rv dollars, its all a Waste
Going from a vet to minor is the worst, damn that shits super Haste
Your overrated for one reason, you said your rhymes were Misplaced
^Was feeling them barz,,... I'm not gonna say who come
better coz you both used totally different styles the type
of colab I like...

Nice drop by both and thats word,,...

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