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Old 11-26-04, 04:01 PM   #13
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Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
This was feedback posted for Elusiv G

IP:

Dame I had my vote done but the system was trying
to say I had under 20 posts lmao....

Anyway I not gonna write out what I did before.

Elu come nice one this battle in every department
killed it with the word play on the last two barz
sicck close man. He had dope word play...

Lil Rip, gets ripped quik, wit ma sik, lyrical shit
Ur punk ass, like glass, get broke fast cos nigga your out of your class//

Flow dope with hard hitting punches and a few personals.

Rip not on the level I liked...
but i can understand if you get mad at me//
cause i know you got a strong belief about keeping it in the family//
but it was a bit predictable... didn't have any wordplay
so your verse lacked complexity...

Vote ~ EG

I still can't vote WTF!!!