Voted For: .MictoriouS.

alright mictorious got this

break down

wicked-aaight u had a good flow going on in that verse and i saw some multi's which helped it your structure was off though and you lacked vocab...i didnt really see any hard hitting punches or any good personals in your verse try makeing them more direct instead of babbling about him.....make them mean something....you coulda came harder....5/10

mic-aight you had really stretched lines and shit try to even out your structure and git rid of the / after your verse.....you came harder with punches and personals they were more direct and they landed....you had a lot of multis in your verse which is nice to see.....your vocab topped wicked's cuz you had more that he did......8/10

return the favor...links in sig
v/.MictoriouS.

peace~1

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