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Old 11-26-04, 05:07 PM   #3
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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

"POKING BEHIND" in tha MIC only way u can get ya "ASS in da BUSSINESS"/
ELEMENTAL claims he eats EmcEEs....he does he "SWALLOWS my CHLIDREN"// (swallow yuck)

This was funny, man. Nice wordplay on it, it took me a while to get it but hey, I'm kind of slow.

In my opinion, this was a poor battle. ES verse was kind of sloppy, the only clever line I heard was this one:

"You must be stoned like a fucken madusa victim"

No wordplays, a few metas, but an overall poor quality. Didn't try to hard, I suppose.

Jay attempted a good verse, but what can you do with only three bars? I'ma have to give this one to him, because of effort and an attempt at complexity.
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