Voted For: intensify effect

To be honest, I really couldn't understand J.R.'s verse. He needs to work on structure and form, because what he posted was confusing and hard to read. If the way he'd written it had been better, perhaps I would've been able to consider his verse, but who wants to waste time look at something like that?

IE structure was poor too, but not as bad as J.R.'s. Work on your stretched lines, guys.

However, I did manage to scavage some multis from J.R.'s verse that I thought were good:

You GETS~NO~RESPECT! This “newbie” could “operate on Animals”, we still BET~HE’S~NO~“VET”/
I remove yo HEAD~FROM~YO~NECK, You couldn't "GAIN INTEREST" on RV if you were "CREDIT~CARD~DEBT"//

But what the fuck is celulite and why spell curse kearse? It just don't make no sense.

My vote goes to IE because he was more original. This got me:

why battle-me son! I "Roast Suckers"... Bustin Hard like Broke-Rubbers...
Smoke and Toast Duckers... I'm like "Ray Stanz" the way I " Ghost - Busters"...

this is u'r stop wait...*ZOOOM*.... u'r skill's is about as close as the nigga in the next coast...
so its "Obviously u'll lose"... but maybe not... why dont u ask George "W" how to cheat out Votes.... BITCH!!

pC.

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