Voted For: ~philosopher~

ok 9th degree good vocab and structure story was not as emotional ender was not that good but ok basically you both had the same idea which was the wrong topic but philosopher had a better ending as well as a more visual and entertaining story so i have to say he won 9th good also but your story was too direct and to the point while philosopher gave a more vivid story and that wins topicals.
v- philosopher

both you return honest votes

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