Thread: for my mother
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Old 11-26-04, 06:38 PM   #2
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Mmm, Flow Was Consistant Nothing Special Though...
I Like The Concept, Whole 2pac Type Ish...
It Was A Heart Felt Piece...
Nice Emotion And Content...
Maybe Just Improve Ya Flow Alittle...
Then It'd Be Perfect...
Good Job Overall Though...
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