Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

ok sries very basic vacab needs work flow and structure ok visuale not there and that hurt you bad a 4/10
4bloodhound good flow and structure vocab is decent good visuale here as well funny ass ender also i liked your story you used to suck youve really elevated good shit here a 6/10
visuales win topicals and 4blood gave a much better story and easy to see description

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