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11-26-04, 08:27 PM
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Nice drop man I like the way you used the two diffrent years,,.
the 2nd verse was deeper coz we can both relate to that.
Had good use of vocab wordplaybut the flow was missing in places, altogether a pretty decent.
Nice one
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