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Old 11-26-04, 09:06 PM   #8
DrasticMeasureZ
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..war is at it's peak,and the beast is in command..
..money is the major issue,considered poor if you only got a grand..
..everything is machine's and artificial intelligance..
..at time's we do thing's,that seem like we gave hell a glance...
..fake media is what the goverment televised..
..we try surviving,but each time we put in effort,hell will rise..
..crack head's are converting our children into fiend's..
..being prescribed medicine,with a name we dont what it mean's..
..police are out of control with all there brutality..
corner drug pusher's end being another fatality
no one seem's happey,more tear's than smile's and joy
thing's are crazy,cant understand why pedphile's deploy
problem's arent sorted,just aborted to be locked up
continuislly regreting our action's,hating that we fucked up
working for minimal wage,it's a subliminal way
of course we have love, but forced to put it aside
when we come to a river,we just turn our back's and hide.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ THATS MY FAV VERSE RIGHT THURR U FITED EMOTIONS AND CREATIVITY IT WAS REALLY DEEP SHIT FAM...........NICE 9/10 DA STRUTURE IT WAS AN LIL BIT CHOPPY BUT DA FLOW IT POPPED UP GOOD........VOCAB WHICH IS DA DIZZAM.........NICE MAYNE GOOD DROP
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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