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Old 11-26-04, 10:39 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by fi-del
1900

..peace was tranquial,a beast would thankyou for lending a hand..
..money wasnt a thing,no big deal,your not spending a grand
..man made machine's are yet to be created..
..never ever a time we done somthing we hated..
..thing's seemed calm and collective,only nature to battle..
..green surrounding's,living off the land,can you picture the cattle..
..we survived by doing thing's for ourself's,no machine's to use..
..good old home brew,is the only thing fien's abuse..
..drug's were not an issue,no such thing's as prescription's..
..police were normal citizen's,no such thing as conviction's..
..struggle's arent here,because money is not needed..
..we selling weat for meat,we love to meet and greet..
..no such thing's as land dispute's,no goverment or a tribunal..
..no tear's, just smile's and joy,even at a guy's funeral..
..we sort out problem's in a family council setting..
..everything we done we enjoy,never left sitting back and regreting..
..we dont work a nine to five for a boss at a minimal cost..
but we do work to stay safe,otherwise family is lost
..but we love all and help one another out..
..no problem's when we come to a river,just find another route..



2000

..war is at it's peak,and the beast is in command..
..money is the major issue,considered poor if you only got a grand..
..everything is machine's and artificial intelligance..
..at time's we do thing's,that seem like we gave hell a glance...
..fake media is what the goverment televised..
..we try surviving,but each time we put in effort,hell will rise..
..crack head's are converting our children into fiend's..
..being prescribed medicine,with a name we dont what it mean's..
..police are out of control with all there brutality..
corner drug pusher's end being another fatality
no one seem's happey,more tear's than smile's and joy
thing's are crazy,cant understand why pedphile's deploy
problem's arent sorted,just aborted to be locked up
continuislly regreting our action's,hating that we fucked up
working for minimal wage,it's a subliminal way
of course we have love, but forced to put it aside
when we come to a river,we just turn our back's and hide.


Damn "fi-del", you did it again, I honestly cannot wait for your audio.
I cant believe this is gettin slept on, prolly cos of ppl like me, who eitehr come in and drop fake feed just to please someone, or jsut elave it alltogether, Nah man, but theres only a few open mics I will actually sit down and read, And this was definetly one of them, When I get my own label, I'm signin you. I liked the way, you structured both, roughly the same by bars, I dunno whether I was the only one that noticed 'Fien' in the 8th bar twice. But serious man, this was dope, if you correct up a coulpe spelling mistakes,

Definetly one of the best open mics out here.
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