Voted For: Valor
Empire..
i liked your verse but it kinda fell off a little in the end.. plus the fact that id didnt rhyme didnt help you much but it is a poetry piece so i understand that but valor's piece started off pretty weak but gained momentum in the middle and he kept rolling with the topic and it ended up a good piece... empire it was a good bitten verse but valors was better
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