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Old 11-27-04, 01:24 AM   #9
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Voted For: Skriptz


Skriptz, ur a child to me, u gettin an exclusiv, battlin tha G
U got as much gangsta as Winona ryder, and ur attemptin 2 steal a win from me
4/10
your "Just An Emcee", bitch please, dont lie and fake behind tha screen of your P.C
u liv in Norfolk, for all u US cats, dats da UK's home of wannabe G's
6/10
Wit a name like urs, id xpect uncomprehndible rhymes, earth shatterin n movin lines
but from the looks of it, ur illeterate, cos half ur shit dnt make sense like ur typin but ur blind.
5/10

nice punches
nice metas
nice personals
ya structure was a lil off
could of came harder here
no similies really

Elusiv G Was Left In The Corner When Skill Was Handed Out
This Wins Mine You Should Have Atleat Had Ur Verse Planned Out
6/10
I'm Spittin Fresh Shit As If Peppermints Laced My Vocal Cords
You Spit Wooden, I Rip And Break Your Style Coz Your Board
5/10
Mayn this bitch is stupid…tryin to spit good to every nigga in-sight
Thinkin he da shit…he can’t even spell even spell his rap name right
7/10

nice punches
ok personals
ya closer is wha won it 4 u
perfect structure
nice and short
stuck righ 2 the punch
nice metas
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