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Old 11-27-04, 04:17 AM   #28
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Voted For: Tstorm

my vote has to go to tstorm....... just by looking at the verse i can make this decision..... BRILLIANT structure... flow was spot on... all bars are perfectly even...... in terms of the topik.... i would still have to say t-storm....
the pragmatic stones, entwining time and reavealing affirmation
water fountain calms the soul, frogs providing visual fascination
wind blows with surgical prescission,whistles the autumn leaves
the overwhelming riches of the magpie..mother natures thieves
^^^^^ theres some pretty deep shit in here..... and i like it
conculsion..... mate it wasnt bad..... but your flow and structure let you down... and your verse... just didnt have the feeling that t-storm had... anyway good battle
return the favour k
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