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Old 11-27-04, 09:19 AM   #13
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Voted For: R-Rated

this was actually a pretty dope battle...

r-rated.. you came straight out the gate and killed your verse... everything was pretty good from the get-go.. tons of good wordplay , imagery was there... good flow.. decent structure.. overall your piece was dope

9/10

streetryda:

your verse was also pretty good... decent flow.. some OK wordplay.. structure was better than R's and imagery was just as good.. there was more emotion in your verse but you didnt use it to your advantage.. youre a good topical writer though
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