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POINT BLANK DISTANCE read it hook me up with some feed
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11-27-04, 09:48 AM
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hmmm good using of multis and metaphores....not bad vocabulary stucture could use a bit more work....but this aint that bad for a intro song...7/10...pretty good for a newbie i say
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