mess with me get cooked
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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0
iight man found out my grl cheatin....
now that nigga got a prollem cuz he gon get a beatin...
see i got demonds runnin threw my mind sayin kill dat nigga...
so i pull out da glock n start pullin the trigga....
^^^^^^^^^ AT DIS PART WAS KINDA WEAK U HAD EMOTIONS BUT THE WORDS WAS KINDA WEAK FAM
see she told me she loved but thats sum bull shyt....
she jus wanted money now sum otha dude hittin da clit...
well i got shells hittin his dome from tha chrome...
blastin away his memories like sylvester stalone*....
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD META'Z AND FEELIGNS AND EMOTIONS
so i walk ta my grls house n thier they r....
tryin ta fuck but it wont happin...
blastin clips threw the crib makin sure evry1 feel the clappin
^^^^^^^^^6 OK CLOSA NICE EMOTIONS TO END IT
ARES- U HAD AN GOOD EMOTIONAL DA FEELINGS BUT DA CREATIVITY AND THE IMAGINARY WASNT GOOD ELEVATE ON THEM TOPICALS HOMIE
Havin rough times, definitly nothin thats in this world could save me,
I was sure we surely would never end up like that girl and Shady,
Questioned your loyalty cuz Troy and me fuckin heard you ain't, see,
Cuz of that I came home on time, cuz i wasn't stayin out early lately,
Walked into the bedrom, and removed was your trusted disguise,
Never woulda guess I'da walked in and seen you fuckin a guy,
Everything you said was nothin but lies, so while I stand by the door,
I'll reminisce on all the times and wonder if i should put my hand on the 4,
I loved you... From the bottom of my heart, you cut me deep,
While I go downstairs and start to remove that trusty sheath,
I don't know how to explain my feelings now, but I will when,
Im done writin this note and I can't write no with this ink pen,
Im thinkin of the future, and damn what I been thinkin is awful,
When I should be thinkin bout the present, now wheres my gun run off to?
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT U HAD EMOTIONS AND FEELINGS DEFINITELY GOOD CREATIVITY AND IMAGINARY
HOUND- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE I SENSE CHA FEELIGNS AND CHA EMOTIONS U GOT FLOW BUT ELEVATE ON DEM VOCAB MAYNE
OVERALL= HOUND GETS MY VOTE CAUSE OF FLOW AND GOOD STRONGLY EMOTIONS AND CREATIVITY
ARES- U DIDNT HAD AN GOOD FLWO WHICH GOT HOUND THE VOTE BUT IT WAS BECAUSE U DIDNT HAD NO CREATIVITY OR IMAGINARY MAYNE.......U GOTS TO GO DEEP
PEACE
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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