Voted For: Poetikal Panda

Savouring The Sweet Fruit's & Asset's Of a Glorious Haven-
Fluent In WildLife Like Butterfly's & Squirrel's & a Presence of a Raven-
Assortment's Of Flower's Emboss & Bless The Natural Essence-
The Odour Of God's Friut's Cause's a Mind Reaction To a Reminiscennce-
Ivy Leave's Curl & Trickle Down into a Twisted Heap Of Mixed Green-
It was Like Standing In the Forbidden Garden With The Holy Lord & Adam & Eve-
My Heart felt Warm, Warm because it felt like i was being Cradled In the arm's Of Mother Nature-
Angelic Figure's Watched The Development Of The Produce's Of the Creator-
My Feeling's Were Lost & My Soul Had Been Washed & was Now Clean-
Superior To The Cloud's Which Habited Heaven It was The Most Enlightening Place i had ever seen-
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WOW NICE FUCKING SHIT HERE U HAD CREATIVITY......EMOTIONS.........IMAGINARY........ .DA FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP BUT IT WAS COOL.........AND VOCAB DIS IS AN GOOD SHIT HERE FAM NICE GOING



as the evening sunlight penetrates, so subsides the misty haze
the water fountain,the tranquill beauty of the hegerowed maze
amazed how the crazy paving adourns the lillys in all there glory
the whole place bustling with life, each creature telling a story
the pragmatic stones, entwining time and reavealing affirmation
water fountain calms the soul, frogs providing visual fascination
wind blows with surgical prescission,whistles the autumn leaves
the overwhelming riches of the magpie..mother natures thieves
poppys produce a refined divine beauty..coulors set me alight
through the day an ellegance, but its real beauty comes at night
^^^^^^^^^ O AIIIIIGHT I SEE SOME.......FLOW.......NO VOCAB..........IMAGINARY..............NOT MUCH CREATIVITY............NOT MUCH OF EMOTION



OVERALL= BOTH OF U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE DROP FROM DA BOTH OF YA FAM.............BUT DA PERSON WITH THE MOST POINTS IN EVERY TOPICAL CATEGORY WAS CONCLUSION DA NIGGA HAD EVERYTHING THAT MAKES AN GOOD DROP OF AN TOPICAL

TSTORM U HAD AN GOOD DROP NICE FAM BUT U DIDNT HAD THAT MUCH OF CREATIVITY NO VOCAB........PLUS DA EMOTIONS I WAS FEELING IT FAM


V-CONCLUSION

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

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