Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..

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I Feel That OutBreak Took This Battle Because of Better Imagery and Overall Story/Plot. I Felt Outbreaks Story More With Vocabulary, Emotion, and Straight Imagery.

Critic Your Verse Didn't Have A Good Ending and Rambled About The Same Thing...Use Distinctiveness and Creativity.

Vote - Outbreak

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