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Old 11-27-04, 01:39 PM   #4
Acuity
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Shit rhymes is the accosiation wit T-storm, nuns read ur rhymes 2 fall asleep in their dorms
my rhymes are blazin, yours are just simply luke-warm//

Im surprised u set dis up after my reply, in Front Lines
Cos u winnin is more improbable than seein 2pac, on saturday night Live//

U tried to come hard in ur battle against InGage, u came wit no rage
Ur Lyrics were ugly,wit his 1st line u were already upstaged//

Ur rhyme structure is derformed, elongated and out of place
The deformaties are kinda funny, similar to Micheal Jackson's face//

T-storm, learn how to perform, go home, elevate and reform
u been merked,hit with a meteor swarm, 2 battle me, re-fill the application form//

Yo i came weak in dis rhyme but of a shit freestyle but fuk it, holla at me, honest votes are ALWAYS returned. Peace