Flyweight
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IP:
typhris
you say your verse was effortless, yet you make words bold and some with this kinda thing and leavin dictionary definitions and shit, you aint gotta lie kid! BUT.. I did think you had nice concepts and punches, the thing that killed your verse was structure/flow.. work on it.
Vango
the meaty part of your verse took this battle:
They call that flavor Mild, so let the king of punches ask RV a question????
I just got done reading Typhris's verse, anyone else got indigestion
Let me put forth a suggestion, Typhris has suicide ever crossed your mind
Cuz you got half of RV contemplating and the rest wishing they were blind
So now let me push rewind, remember how I said that Vango's analytical
Well you just been voted RV's biggest herb, and believe me its not Political
Vote: Vango
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