that was probably one of the best drops ive read on this site.... the visuals-... horrible to imagine but discribed very very well the emotions-so great i could deffinatly imagine feeling way if this were me or sumone i know....the flow was great it all went together good... your detail in this was wonderful every little feeling made the poem that much better... i could feel the pain ... from every line the first to the last i was feeling it very deep... makes you really sit back and look at the world and wonder how the hell ppl can do shit like that to each other... your characters you created were well developed and i either felt an emense amount of pity torward them or a crap load of hate.... not that hard to figure out which feeling goes to which character... your a great poet.... much much much respect~peace~1luv