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Old 11-27-04, 10:07 PM   #22
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Voted For: Cosmos.

cos, had some ok lines i didnt feel anything hit extremely hard in this battle...some forced concepts in ya bars...
but for the most part ya verse was on point...
closer was decent.....
other verse...really dissapointed jay,i heard you were a vet.
your punches were weak, ya vocab was simple...
not enough thought put into your lines with the wordin n all, opener was self glorification...overall, up ya vocab ,punches n flow..n you'll be good..
cos,for an overall better verse..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!