Ay Hazy..
I was feelin this piece..Not my favorite of yours but it was on point..You had a good flow, and lots of lines that were just trademarked Hazy..For example:

>evasive meanings you delivred to my thirsty mind...a breed of man like you..well...is simply hard to find......id cash in all my smiles to just have you grin.....to realpse my feelings...i dont kno where to begin.....

>for you the rules im always bending....and to this fairy tale freind ship i see no happy ending

I thought towards the middle, things were kinda being repeated a little, but you came thru in the end, I was really likin how you concluded it and tied the title in in the last verse.

D Luxx, feelin ya flow too, had some nice multi's n heartfelt bars..Let me get chu a couple quotes....

>you tryed to persuad me into fallen into your traps of pain//
i tryed my hardest to explain, but your heart went to my brain/

Nice^

>my heart and lifes emty but i will go on//
guess this is bye, let your heart grow on//

aw..that was a good/sad line...feelin it..

Overall feelin this piece..Yall came pretty nice in the cypher..Stay up with this n keep droppin em.
peace.