Voted For: Tstorm

BREAKDOWN :: remember to return the favor

Elusiv G = Your Verse Started Out Really Weak But Then Started To Form In The Body Of The Verse..
But Your Opener And Finisher Were Not That Good..

Highlights : U tried to come hard in ur battle against InGage, u came wit no rage
Ur Lyrics were ugly,wit his 1st line u were already upstaged//
Ur rhyme structure is derformed, elongated and out of place
The deformaties are kinda funny, similar to Micheal Jackson's face//

^^Iliked this part of your verse, it had good multies.. but the punches wernt that hard..

Overall : Your Verse Would Have Been Alot Harder With A Punch In your Intro Duction And Finisher.. You Probablly Would Have Eased This Out With Personals too.. Just Tryin To Help You Out..


T Storm = Your Verse Was Good From Start To Finish, I Didnt Really See Any Flaws In This Occassion..

Highlights : Your Opener.. Closer.. And Epileptic throwin fits.. LOL.. Your Verse Was Everything It Needed To Be To Take The Battle.. Good Punches And Personals..

Overall= You One Upped EG on this occasion And Took The Win.. Just Work On Your First Line So its not so filler.. It Should Comprehend With Your Second Line to Finish The Bar Hard..

Good Job..


Please Return The Favor By Hitting Up A Battle In My Sig.. Thanks..

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