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Old 11-28-04, 11:32 AM   #28
teknikal vuez
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Voted For: ~LIL'DREW~

LIL DREW:
You Won This Battle With Personal After Personal After Personal, And You Had Good Punches.. Your Verse Had Great Enjoyment..

Mindless:
Your Verse Was Way To Simple.. Nothing Complex And Structure Was Terriblle.. Try Setting Up Your Lines One On top Of Eachother To Make The Bar.. Dont Stretch Your Lines..


LIL fav Lines : now to the reader...if u dont think wut i say here is true/
u can always ask black~magik...he was there too/*9


Mindless Fac Lines: take thoughs "got milk?" commechials to seriouly when you cant get yo mom's nipple you cry/



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