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Old 11-28-04, 11:37 AM   #12
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Voted For: teknikal vuez

Then realign the stars to read “u don’t have shit on my raps”
If dick riding wasn’t breaking the rules, he’d sit on my lap
ooo shit that was good...

but the rest of ya verse fell off...
u thought u had him beat with 1 bar which was the best bar in this battle but u need it more to hold up in this battle which u aint bring which hurt'ed u in my eyes cuz u could of easy won with 1 more hard bar...

Drop ~this wack~, wit more ~raps than bags~
and put the Trey Duece to his Chest Like A Six Pack of Abs =-
that was a preety decent opener...

You get ~bitched slapped~, for ~acting bad, you fag~
You say my punches dont hit? But you absorb every jab =-
that was decent....
Your just a ~terrible fad~ something that ~Goes Away~
Cause Like The Flaming AK Your Also Known ~As Gay~ =-

i wasnt feeling the ending nah...
but u had more hard hit in this battle u had more bars that held up that was decent if u would of went with just 1 hard bar then barg the rest like lyrical then lyrical would of won but u tossed another decent bar which made me pick u...

flow: even
punches: tek
all around better verse: tek

returnt he favor of a vote....