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Old 11-28-04, 12:00 PM   #2
teknikal vuez
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Posts: 172
From: New York
IP:

Voted For: SCIP

SCIP:
Your Rhymes Are Still Simple But Your Elevating.. Your Punches Are Getting Better And Your Multies Are Getting Better.. You stopped rhyming 3 letter words thats good.. your elevating good job..

Blaza:
You Are Way To Simple.. You Tried for multies but it didnt get you anywhere.. with your multies you need a sylable sylable sylable.. and make sure you match the sylables with your second line.. it makes the flow nice, and deadly..
Pm me if you have any questions..
also add some hott punchlines.. take your time on a verse and think of something hott. the most creative way to diss your oppenent..


Fav Line From SCIP:
Ur Barz have fillers that are lines that dont make sense like caps wit creases/

Fav Line From Blaza:
IM Free its easy im not afraid to SCIP my way to victory


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