Voted For: Retro

Premenition:
1.Your Verse Was All Over The Place.. Get Your Structure Down. It Totally Ruins Your Flow..
2. You Had No Hard Hitting Punches At All.. Really Decreased the Value Of Your Verse.

likes:
1. Good Personals And Use Of Personals..
2. Good Multies.


Retro:

dislikes:
1. Played Punches

likes:
1. Good personals.. Hit Hard Just The Two You Had.
2. Good punches.. Except For A Few.. Plus Prem didnt Have Any So This catagory raised immensly
3. good multies all the way through, and good wordplay..


Overall you just took this verse..
opener to closer..


gj..




looking for honest feedback on my battles.. will re return the favor..

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