Voted For: Method.
i wasnt really feelin this battle, but my vote goes to method mainly because his structure was better, and he had a more consistent flow. decreasin your font dont hide your stretched lines though homie, instead of tryin to cram shit all together space it out so its easier to read.
tek, i know you was makin shit bold and puttin lines on words to signify that it was a punch,but you shouldnt have to do that, especially since yours werent that complex. next time try to make your structure where all the lines are around the same length, and make some more complex punches if you goin for the punchline style
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