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Old 11-28-04, 01:35 PM   #8
teknikal vuez
Flyweight
 
Posts: 172
From: New York
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Voted For: Tstorm

<<<BREAKDOWN>>>


TStorm:
another newb to rv steps to battle...but hasnt elevated like the last
Like u had an accident..scraped through,but ya style didnt survive the car crash
ehh Alright Opener (4/10)
with so many "cracks" in this guys structure..he mustve been snorting coke
you remind me of cling-film on the toilet...coz u really are a practical joke!
Eeh Alright (5/10)
no chance of winning...battling me`s like taking a national lottery bet
you couldnt make ya vocabulary sick...if u threw up the alphabet!
lol i laughed (6/10)
i tell you for free, you cudnt hit 2 straight lines..if you keyed em on a car
and ya rhyme skills are less interesting...than your blank avatar!
good personal.. bad punch to begin it(5/10)
so outta focus, put you in front of a mirror and you still wouldnt see
not to stir shit up,but you dnt get more "herbish" than a guy called royal-tea!
Lol (6/10)


Royal_T:
I cant believe you wanna battle me, Its gonna be a tragedy,
Softer than a song featuring Nick Cannon and Cassidy/
That Was Really Wack... (3/10)
My lyrics like bullets so u betta keep on your teflon vest,
Or else Im see yo p*ssy ass laid in a box, in a funeral dress/
um even worse (2/10)
Sayin that sh*t u said, I see you feenin for a loss, and you finna get served, My lyrics like a tazor, have ya shakin like a dancer in you got served/
yea (4/10)
Yo sorry lyrics aint gonna have nobody impressed, But people gonna pay you respect after I blow a whole in yo chest/
yea (4/10)
Listen, this Aint the first time you gonna lose to me, You aint taking a bow cuz you did good, but you bowing cuz Im f*ckin ROYAL T
best line (5/10)


Punches: Ts
Personals: Ts
Flow: Ts
Structure: Tie
Complexity: Ts
Multies: Ts

opener: Ts
Closer: Ts
Conistency: Ts


Ts.. i see you came easy in this battle no need to harp on you..

RT.. Make your punches harder hitting. look at some of the verses on the site and compare yours to thiers.. you will see a big difference take notes.. and practice..
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