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Old 11-28-04, 02:33 PM   #14
Terse.
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Voted For: Tstorm

not a bad battle...

Elusiv, ya verse was aight...the structure was meh, so the flow was kinda off...i didnt see any personals from u...and punchwise, u were a lil lacking...u were consistent with them, but they seemed too indirect and failed to hit hard.....ya vocab was a plus tho...

Tstorm, first off, i dunno what was up with your first bar...it was a good attempt at a personal, but i think u got Elusiv mixed up with Exclusive...anyways, the structure was on point, so there was a good flow to your verse...punchwise u came real decent...u were consistent and your punches were more direct...

V/ Tstorm, for more direct/harder-hittin punches....