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Old 11-28-04, 04:02 PM   #12
Abraxas
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Voted For: Empire

damn!! you really got a tite poem....
Empire: i felt like you stayed more on the poerty topic... also yours had very good flow which made ya poem goodthe structre was kinda messed but it didnt really matter i liked how you made the poem... real good.... and you improved on poerty
SOc: to tell ya the truth...that was kinda weak....didnt really stay much on the poerty topic and lacked allot of basics of poerty...... sorry to say but empire really took the win hands down....
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