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Old 11-28-04, 04:08 PM   #13
Abraxas
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woah.... i thought you'd come dope on this one too empire.... but it looks like as if the topic poerty didnt suit you....yours was quite ok
EMpire: yours was iigiht.....i thought you'd come more deeper in this poerty you had nice and deep meanings though... structre was messed but ya flow was really iight....
FOrsaken: you took the lead throughtout the poem...it was very deep and strong in its topic and meanign..i didnt like the first verse of it however.... didnt like how you worded it...
VOte FOrsaken ..... i really though emp would take this easly..but.....
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