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Old 08-01-02, 02:17 PM   #2
Painkillaz
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This was OK...

Some lines were decent and some were just played...
I'll point them out...

Decent:illuminate the fagget, out of the continent// i'm too competent// caliph aint got the balls, to compete with mah verbal complement//

Everything else was either corny , played out , or straight up
wack....

And lookin back on it some of the words didn't rhyme...

Case in pont:THE FIRST 2...

This was OK tho....Keep Buildin
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