bot of these rymes were off

bad line:
Rar one....."Fatter Than Bubba Sparx ~ Wonders Why Cats Call Him Ugly//
Musta Been With Timbaland To Long ~ He's Always Hungrey//"..........this line is completely off subject,i would think u were battlen buba sparxxx

Travesty...."Im The Wild One Who's Styles Done Basically To Perfection//
When My Words Connectin N Verb Selectin It Converts To Murder Weapons//"...........completley off topic...you have stay consistant

good lines
Rar one...."How's This Cat Down With Shit ~ His Money Already Spent//
Holden Two Quatars ~ An Thinks He's Cool With 50 Cent//"......your best line rar one...wasent spectacular

Travesty...."An When My Verbal Gun Pops It Atops All Action Like A Goal In One Shot//
An TRAVEZTY Servin Ya Like Tennis I Cause More Racket Than Dunlops//"...your best line Travesty,still alil off topic though

all around this was close.You both could of came Harder.But wat swayed my vote was tha word play.More multis.More metaphors sooooo

vote=rar one