alright, reveiw time. you got a good voice if you utilized it correctly. you gotta get tha twist just right. your flow and lyrics are basic f'sho. but i can picture them improving. i peeped ur earlier shit and this is much better. but u still got work ahead. one peice of advice i could give u is not to mimic your influences, the thing that makes an ill rapper ill is that he's unique, you gotta be one of those influences that has beginers mimicing. so just elevate your OWN style and shit'll be straight. you gotta work on dem lyrics tho, they holdin you down.

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