mess with me get cooked
|
This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
IP:
You make less sense than chinese cartoon's dummy,
I mean we'r still all awaiting this 'Audio soon, coming'
I say awaiting, the word I'm looking for is dreading,
Who wants to here a 14 yr old, attempting story telling,
Especially a Faggot that wears pink at parties to be cool,
I look at Mike Hawk's sig, shit get's me rollin every time dude,
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS NICE
To be honest you can't type, So how you gonna battle??
Even your family hates you 'No pics of X up on the mantle'
Serious man, you'v got a face even a mother would hate,
Your like 'I'll be as good as you in 3 years when I elevate!!'
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES GOOD FLOW
OVERALL= YA VERSE WAS GOOD NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW......DECENT PUNCHES EITHER WAY DIS WAS AN GOOD VERSE NICE (THUMBS UP)
Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
^^^^^^^^^^^ EH THAT CLOSA WAS KINDA WEAK FAM
OVERALL= OK VERSE UNTIL THE CLOSA JUST PUT IT DOWN THE DRAIN......U HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES ON THA 1ST PART...U SHOULD KEPT THAT GOING....BUT DEN U ENDED WACKNESS ON THA CLOSA
IN MY OPINION I THINK DISTILLED GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW.......THA PERSONALS & PUNCHES TOOKED OVA
XCLUSIVE- U HAD AN GOOD START BUT AT THE END U JUST FUCKED IT UP.......PUNCHES WERE GOOD FROM THE BEGINNING...BUT AT THE END OF THE CLOSA U JUST CAME NOT HARD.......
SO I GIVE DIS TO DISTILLED
__________________
THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-
Quote:
Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
|
SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!
P.S.A
COMING SOON- GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW -THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
|