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Old 11-29-04, 04:23 PM   #2
Acuity
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dope drop yo.....if dats yo shit when ur bored, like 2 c a full piece from u get me, 7.5/10 --- nice structure, good flow, -------1st verse strucure off a bit and rhmin off but sill aight...overall tight drop...return tha favour wit an honest vot or sum feedbak on ma poem...Peace
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