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Old 11-29-04, 04:32 PM   #34
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Voted For: distilled

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
^^^^NO.......... weak intro
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
^^^^^NO........ yo xclusive.... this shit your doiing.... like... "audio" then "sound"..... you think thats word play... it aint... its wack and it sucks.... dont do it
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
^^^^no.... not really....
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
^^^^NOPE.......
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
^^^no.... weak closer....
overall xclusive... weak verse...... that shit you have like your last line with the.... "force" "push" Squeeze" is just weak as wordplay..... nuff said

distilled you wins this man.... good verse...
xclsive..... think about the feedback i gave you and change your shit man it just aint connecting..... vote distilled
you distilled... can you return the favour and drop a vote on the battle in the sig aint.... im dying to get it closed... thx
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