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Old 11-29-04, 07:31 PM   #3
Acuity
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yo dis was a tigh ass drop but man u opened wit a nice line wit humour and den u came wit that wack ass line bout him gettin ass-fucked dat dented the skill level but u picked da shit up in rest of diss wit nice punches, humour and complex lyrics n structure-------------and stay way from lines bout ppl bein faggots n suckin coks- its just old n looks like ur runnin out of ideas......overall - 8/10 if i was streetryda id be workin hard on a comebak cos u ripped it man. Peace
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