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Old 11-29-04, 07:53 PM   #11
DrasticMeasureZ
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Wreck Going To EAT-your-KIDNEY And My Rhymes Are Torchin Flames On Point li
ke HEAT-in-SIDNEY//(think olympics)
They'll send me To Jail For Battery On POINT The Way Wreck-o-nize BEATS-these-WHITNEYS//(bobby jackson beat his wife whitney)
^^^^^^^^^^ OK FLOW DA PUNCH IT WASNT NUTTIN SPECIAL KINDA SEEN THAT BEFORE BUT AN OK PUNCH


Wreck Eat Ya Fist Up So You Cant Throw A Punch/
And I Call You A Heavy Meal But Your Legs Were Lunch/
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD WORDPLAY DA PUNCH WAS EH OK



Wow Call Ya Self Hot How You Cant Spell Ya Name Right/
Cuz I'll Hang Ya To Crosses Like Jesus So Show Him The Light/
^^^^^^^^^^^ DATS AN GOOD PUNCH NICE FAM



Wreck Is Gonna GRABBZ-the-TECKK And You'll Be Missing Your Esophogas Like I STABB-your-NECKK<::>
iM dOing an Operation but sorry you'll Be MissiNg Ya PeNis Like LABBZ-on-SHREKK<::>
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE DECENT CLOSA I LIKE THIS PUNCH GOOD


OVERALL- YA VERSE HAD AN LIL WORDPLAY AND OK PUNCHES DA CLOSA WAS GOOD PUNCH NICE AND DECENT FAM








i didnt call this battle wreckk prolly just wated a loss
this bitch ask heads or tails,when i said he was gettin tossed
your a pussy a fake, ill leave you merked-and-soft
only time this faggot 'hits hard' is when hes 'jerkin-off'
^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD FLOW AND DECENT PUNCHES


ill devour you, your cowardly ways dont effect-me
usin a 'steam roller' is the only way youd ever 'impress-peeps'
your one dumb motherfucker who aint worth a dime
like 'throwin out watches' your just a 'waste of time'
^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY ON THAT ONE...........NOT AN EH GOOD PUNCH THOUGH BUT IT WAS AN OK ONE


i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
ya flow is garbage son my rhymes is unconcievable
you beating me is like Drag Queen Nuns in church..Unbelivable
^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD DECENT PUNCHES



OVERALL- THIS IS AN GOOD VERSE U HAD GOOD DECENT PUNCHES AND FLOW....THE PUNCHES TOOK OVER THIS CATERGORY//////


CONCLUSION-YO BOTH OF U HAD GOOD VERSES GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW BUT I GOTS TO GO WITH THE PERSON WHO HAD HARDEST PUNCHES AND GOOD DECENT ONES> THA HARDEST PUNCHES GOES TO.........PBD

WRECKER YA FLOW WAS MESSED UP AND YA PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER THAN PBD SO WORK ON FLOW AND USING GOOD STRUTURE AND USING PERSONALS AND HARDER PUNCHES

PEACE
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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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