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Old 11-29-04, 08:15 PM   #10
teknikal vuez
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Posts: 172
From: New York
This was feedback posted for headgames

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<<< BREAKDOWN >>>

PUNCHES : HeadGames
PERSONALS : HeadGames
Flow: Both
Wordplay: Neither
Multies : Both
Vokab: HeadGames

Opener: HeadGames, Troop your first line was good, but then you ruined your whole verse with the grandma line.. really poor.

Closer:
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