we aint here to start a revolution...
just maybe come up wit a solution...
to ride tha planet of tha violent polution...
an make time for ya fellow man...
we all a part of gods big plan...
through tha doom an gloom an poverty...
human kinds gonna be come a aminority...
we all lost souls trapped in hell hole as violent...
escalates ten fold so dear mr blair i ahm traumatised...
all i need is for you to authorise my freedom so dear
mr blair dont you realy care about us cuz you always
say jack this cuz you cant hack this young muthers
no future for tha baby will we survive maybe maybe not
our lifes flash befor our eyez this war we livin camera shots of tha news to do or to do not choose what to say couse we all
wit this fucked up world...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT FAM WORK ON DA FLOW AIIIGHT BUT....U NEED TO ELEVATE ON IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY I DIDNT SENSE THAT IN YA TOPICAL VERSE BUT U HAD DA FEELINGS AND EMOTIONS BUT IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY......U NEED THEM 2 THINGS ITS AN MUST FAM







Full of spite...everynight...was this world God's image, His sight?
Yeah right, even I despite I haven't seen half of it, people everywhere fight...
Who is to blame? Who's name? Who targeted the plain into the World Trade?
The son that God gave? Or was it Bush who sent those people to the grave?
Let's point them out...the dictators of violence who know what tryanny's about...
Witout a doubt, Bush is the number one tryant...no reason to even bout...
The world is black...who is launching the attack for no reason in Iraq?
No just reason it's wack...people hate this crap, Bush is just a handicap...
Don't tell me I'm off topic...'cause it's far to late to even attempt to stop it...
This is what the world's like...about this shit people everywhere pop shit...
Greatness...comes in many different flavors...no difference against it...
People go through the same shit everyday after the fuckin' plain hit...
Many kids have no parents, and do they blame it on the terroists..?
If I was in the position, I would blame it on Bush and not be embarrased...
So is this the world we live in? Was this God's creation in the beginnin'?
The point you're missin' my mission is to stop Bush from takin' women and children....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA U HAD SOME MULTI'Z AND GOOD IMAGINARY....VERY CREATIVE ON THIS PART


Many kids have no parents, and do they blame it on the terroists..?
If I was in the position, I would blame it on Bush and not be embarrased...
So is this the world we live in? Was this God's creation in the beginnin'?
The point you're missin' my mission is to stop Bush from takin' women and children....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA CLOSA I LIKED IT.........U HAD VOCAB........IMAGINARY..........CREATIVITY........ ....AND GOOD FLOW


CONCLUSION- I THINK DIS GOES HANDS DOWN TO LIMIT EDITOIN WHICH HE HAD EVERY THING IN AN TOPICAL CATERGORY.......HIP U NEED TO WORK ON EVERY TOPICAL CATERGORY.INCLUDING...IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY.......


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