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Old 11-29-04, 08:39 PM   #8
DrasticMeasureZ
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition

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Inferno Blossom's and Dance;s Around My Child's Bedroom
Intense Heat Lashe's My Face, Could This Be My Doom?
^^^^^^^^^^ WAS THAT IT......READ THA RULE'Z BUT I LIKE THIS BAR.......VERY CREATIVE.........AND GOOD




IMAGINARY.....THATS AN THOUGHTFUL BAR......The way shit is fated, we sometimes take life overated...
We don't want to face it, but life's salty sometimes when we taste it
The anger within, you can sense when the danger begins...
People fuck wit you, have no trust in you, the flame seaps through the skin
You just wish you could die, sometimes you can't survive...
Everything around you a haze, a blaze, it's like your burning alive
You can see the burst, of the flame, it symbolizes your pain...
Oh God it hurts, nothin can save you, pray for the grave, it's insane
Nothing can save you, not even the talent God himself gave you...
You're just a brave fool, fuck it, your a puppet, just a stage tool
Hopes and dreams? Forget it, you just ain' nothin just admit it...
You don't want to live it, but it's hard when your own mom said it
Don't get it twisted, happiness is somethin' truly gifted...
Until the day, I pray, the tormenters' opinion that abused me shifted
You don't really care, when people burn, people stare...
I'm not fussy, I'm not ever fuckin' lyin, trust me...I was there...
^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA GOOD FLOW.....NICE IMAGINARY........AND GOOD CREATIVITY


CONCLUSION- DAMN~! LIMIT STOP PUTTING 200 POST JEEZE'Z ANYWAY.......LIMIT EDITION GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE OF.........MORE.........CREATIVITY......IMAGINARY. ......GOOD FLOW..........AND MORE THOUGHTFUL........

CONCLUSION- DONT WRITE 1 BAR READ THE RULE'Z OK BEFORE U POST YA VERSE AIIIIIGHT

BUT THAT 1 BAR DID ALMOST HAD ALL THE TOPICAL QUALITIES....NICE BAR~!
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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