Voted For: J.R. Freeze

j.r. took this hands down...

In comparion, *THIS BATTLE* is kinda like a fuckin’ *REAR VIEW ~MIRROR~*//
Cause *YOUR SKILLS are *MILES BEHIND MINE*, and your *DEFEAT* is *“CLOSER THAN IT ~APPEARS~”*//

^this punch was hella creative...and it actually flowed and kept the structure...

all of j.r. verse flowed...his wordplay was flawless...and his structure made it impossible to get lost in readin da verse...
the punches all came hard...and made this otha dude look hella dumb...

ne way...symm...fix yo structure a little...bring dem punches a little harder...and keep yo barz tha same length in syllables and shit...when ya do dat you'll have it...

v/ j.r. freeze

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