Voted For: 4fil

srry but i gotta give it 2 ta 4fil
multies= vuelz(not used 2 full extent)
punches (4fil definetily)
structure(4fil)
wordplay(neither had any)

Umm 4fil your verse was cool, as you just had punch after punch, and they hit hard (especialy da 1st 1). Just improve on ya wordplay n multies ta make ya punch felt more ite.

t.v man you need ta sort ya structure out, n elevate more.
Try using better words instead of head..lead. e.t.c, n ya know they always say worplay is da horseshoe in ya boxing gloves man^^, so work on it, plus up ya vocab n u'll fucking rip^^..trust me.